How Long Should Stories Be?

I have a new poll. This concerns that old bugbear, story length. Tell me what your favourite length is, if you have one. And do feel free to expand upon the issue in the comments.

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Maid To Serve, 2nd Edition

I got a disheartening two stars for an older story, Maid To Serve. The reviewer said it was far too short. Well! I had a look at it and revised it a bit and it has come from 5,000 to about 5,500 words. Just ten percent more. Why not lots more? Well, I happen to think it is complete as-is. I mean, I wanted it to end on a note of anticipation rather than go into great detail about what happens to Rob/Roberta. It was my very first frilly and I dare say it has all the flaws of a first attempt. But I am still fond of it. So I left it substantially the same. The cover of the revised edition is above, and the 2nd edition should be downloadable by the time you read this.

As ever, your opinions on it are very welcome. Should it have been longer? Should I write a sequel describing what happened on Sunday? Answers on a postcard to… Oh, dear, showing my age! Seriously, do tell me what you think in the comments.

Training a Husband

Training A Husband: Learning To Please Her, Book III of Husband Trainers, is the latest Femdom BBW Body Worship Fantasy from Miss Miranda Birch. The big, beautiful, strict bitches of Miss Masters Marriage Services can tame and train even the most wayward of men. “Husband trainers for the dominant woman” is their motto. Body worship training is their speciality, with emphasis on the “three Bs”: Boobs, Belly and Bum. These BBW girls love their femdom work! And their hapless victims? Do they enjoy being trained? Perhaps not so much. But who cares about them? In their future lives as sex-toys for wives and girlfriends, only the women’s pleasure matters!

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NB: my books are always available on Amazon and Smashwords; but, due to circumstances beyond my control (censorship), they are only likely to be available on Kobo, Nook (Barnes & Noble), iBooks (Apple) and Tolino.

Amazon

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Polly

Polly: Dominated Domestic Drudge is my latest Frilly Femdom Fantasy. An `old flame’ makes a chance reappearance in a man’s life. He is eager to start where they left off. She is dubious. But they can get back together, she finally concedes — on certain conditions. A female-led relationship ensues, with Pete transformed into Polly, a chaste, fully-uniformed housemaid! Fiona’s style of femdom is that of a “velvet domme” — but it is still very much female domination, and she is very much in charge!

See my list of stories for lots more Frilly Femdom Fantasies!

BUY THIS BOOK

NB: my books are always available on Amazon and Smashwords; but, due to circumstances beyond my control (censorship), they are only likely to be available on Kobo, Nook (Barnes & Noble), iBooks (Apple) and Tolino.

Amazon

Here is a comprehensive set of links for this book to the various Amazon Kindle Stores. If your country isn’t on the list, use USA (plain vanilla amazon.com).
USA | UK | Germany | France | Spain | Italy | Netherlands | Japan | India | Canada | Brazil | Mexico | Australia

Smashwords

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Kobo

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iBooks (Apple)

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Nook (Barnes & Noble)

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Tolino et al

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From Master to Maid

The latest Frilly Femdom Fantasy from Miranda Brich is called From Master To Maid: The Housekeeper Takes Control. A strong-willed mature woman turns her young male employer into a uniformed maid-servant! When dressed in his frilly uniform (and he always will be!), he must call her Ma’am — and curtsey — and obey — and feel her leather strap across his bare bottom when he fails to live up to her very exacting standards!

BUY THIS BOOK

NB: my books are always available on Amazon and Smashwords; but, due to circumstances beyond my control (censorship), they are only likely to be available on Kobo, Nook (Barnes & Noble), iBooks (Apple) and Tolino.

Amazon

Here is a comprehensive set of links for this book to the various Amazon Kindle Stores. If your country isn’t on the list, use USA (plain vanilla amazon.com).
USA | UK | Germany | France | Spain | Italy | Netherlands | Japan | India | Canada | Brazil | Mexico | Australia

Smashwords

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Kobo

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iBooks (Apple)

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Nook (Barnes & Noble)

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Tolino et al

Pick your store from the long list in the catalogue, and search away!